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PostSubject: Tinas thoughts   Tinas thoughts I_icon_minitimeFri Feb 08, 2008 8:51 am

Wrote something a few days ago, not too good but ok i think. tell me what u think, please.

Bleeding Heart

There's a man on the news,
leaning out of the window and throwing out his own son,
down into the fireman's arms.
He is from Turkey and his house
has been set in fire by some nazis.

Oh Lord, what happened?

Every 3 seconds a child dies in Africa.
That makes it 30000 everyday.

And I still don't get it

A girl, 13 years old, is raped by her dad
but she's much to frightened to tell anybody.
In two months, she will recognize that she is pregnant.

Where will we end?

A boy is bullied at school
but one day he decides to change something about it.
He sets up a list of people.
They won't survive.

Why do we close our eyes?

A 4- year- old watches her parents arguing
and shouting at each other everyday
They will get divorced
and she'll never trust them again.

Lord, help us.

Do you see my bleeding heart, father?
Do you see the world fading away?
Do you bleed, like we do?
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PostSubject: Re: Tinas thoughts   Tinas thoughts I_icon_minitimeSat Feb 09, 2008 6:14 pm

I found that interesting, you wrote it? i think i should start writing things haha see what "amazing" things i come up with haha.
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PostSubject: Re: Tinas thoughts   Tinas thoughts I_icon_minitimeTue Mar 11, 2008 3:58 am

yes i wrote it.
why interesting? Laughing
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PostSubject: Re: Tinas thoughts   Tinas thoughts I_icon_minitimeTue Mar 11, 2008 2:27 pm

It was interesting for the simple fact that it included true & important facts, & i couldn't write something like that because im not very creative.... at writing anyway. Wink

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